I will sing to the sky
send my voice on the four winds
I will take flight
on wings of gold, wheel in the sun
And I will come down to earth again
return to rest and fly once more
I'm taking a hermeneutics class online now, and we were learning about Hebrew poetry. They use parallelism(corresponding ideas) in different forms- this is the form called synonymous parallelism (similar thoughts expressed together).
Why should my head hang down?
I am blessed with the warmth of the sun
I am surrounded by a world full of flowers
and the smile of God has looked upon me by grace.
Thus will I hold my head high
like a sunflower, looking to the light
This is synthetic parallelism, where an original thought is built on to a climax.
In a clash of many colors without form, there is chaos
but where there is simplicity and expression, there is beauty.
Sort of weird poem, but this is known as antithetic parallelism, where one idea is contrasted with another. It's often used in Proverbs.
One last element, used in scriptural poetry and prose, is chiasm.
1.You are more wild than a thunderstorm
2.More bright than a flash of lightning
3.and yet quiet as the hush before dawn
3.and yet I fear the quiet, as I fear a crouching tiger
2.At least the brightness is visible
1.and the wildness beautiful though furious
Chiastic poetry is a little harder to explain. Its name comes from the greek letter chi, which looks like an X. If the formatting is right, the poem should have a margin that resembles half of an X. This form uses a number of points/ideas, that build to a middle section. This middle section(in my example, the idea of quietude) is the main point of the piece. Then the ideas are repeated in reverse(as shown by the numbers). More than three ideas can be used, in the same form.
Anyways, hope this is a little interesting! I'm really learning about it, and am excited about using these structures in my own writing!! Would you use them? Have you used them? Is there anything that needs clarity in my article? Let me know in the comments!
Thank you, this is very interesting! The poetry of the Bible is so beautiful, particularly in Song of Solomon (don't quite know why people find it so weird tbh . . . I mean, yes, it's about physical intimacy, but I find that lovely rather than awkward). Can I ask where you found your examples?
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad to hear it! Tbh honest I'm the same way- I mean a few parts are awkward but it is beautiful poetry, and I also like that it validates love songs(at least for me) as ok for God's people :) And the cultural difference recorded in it is interesting in itself! (i.e. I personally wouldn't be exactly complimented by my hair being compared to a goat, but hey!) as for the examples, I actually wrote them myself! I probably should have found some biblical examples, too.
DeleteThis is so interesting and I didn't really know this was a thing (well, I'm very ashamed to say that). I'm glad you shared this today!
ReplyDeleteI had studied it a little in OT class, but I hadn't given it much thought since then. In this class we delved a little deeper, so it made much more of an impact on me. That's wonderful to hear <3
DeleteThis is actually so beautiful i almost cannot handle it.
ReplyDeleteWow.
-Abigail
( sweetergetsthejourneyblog.blogspot.com )
Oh goodness, thank you Abigail!!!
DeleteThis was a great post! I've studied some of these aspects in seminary, but we didn't go extremely in-depth and focused more on how knowing the structures helps us understand the Biblical poetry. That was exactly right for the class, but it was fun to read your article since I've been curious about the structure in and of itself. Having your examples helped a lot too, since it can be tougher to really grasp the structures in the Bible since we're reading it in translation. Having examples written in the same language I'm reading them in helps:)
ReplyDeleteThank you!! We didn't go too in-depth, but I'd really like to! Hebrew poetry is so different and interesting! Great! I was hoping examples would be helpful- in class we used Biblical examples which helped a lot but I felt modern poems would really cement it for me and hopefully readers!
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